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Thursday, 5 September 2019

Persuasive Writing 2

      Swimming lessons should be compulsory for all studentsGather Ideas1.Will help students learn howto swim2.Give more opportunities to have fun  3.You can keep fit while swimming4.These lessons can help with our future


Introduction
  Swimming lessons can help students learn how to swim if they don't know how.It will be good for our health because you keep fit at the same time.


People like to go swimming at places like pools,the beach maybe even at the lake or the river,but some people don't like swimming either they're to scared because they don't know how and may drown.In my opinion swimming is a lot of fun.

Swimming lessons are great because if you were at the beach or something and you didn't know how to swim and you were stuck in a rip than these lessons would help you.In my opinion I think that this is a great opportunity for all students to have a fun and learn things at the same time.


Swimming it encourages people to come together,you may have some friends and family that are interested in swimming and want to learn.Some students may not like swimming but it can help build your confidence and get other people to get into it.You may watch it on television,go to the pools or the beach to watch people swimming and having a good time.




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